Saturday, October 22, 2011

Short story series? Need thoughts.

If 'Power' is enjoyable, we (the royal we) can endeavor to turn it into a series.

Next... perhaps 'Power, Gaining It'.

Your thoughts?

8 comments:

EDWARD said...

Please keep the story coming,I cant wait to read more.The pump remind's me of the pool boy story,I think I'll go back and read that one again.

Anonymous said...

Yes, I would love to see this as a series. Personally, I'd like to see it merged with the previous story "Balls, they have'm, I want'm"(sp?)

Watson said...

Yes of course. You are my favorite femdom writer. I love your attention to the psychological and emotional feelings of the sub.

Yes, "gaining power," "keeping power," attempts at "regaining power," consequences of "resisting loss of power...."

Anonymous said...

I think this story is pretty much complete as is, though I feel it would benefit from an epilogue of sorts, perhaps showing what their life would be another few years from now. Is this the way he is going to live out his life, or do they have something much more sinister planned for him?

Anonymous said...

As a sub/cuck husband to a Black BBW, I'd love to see some variation of the Miss Lu sort, hapless husband, stepson etc. in a marriage of convienience. All your work is riveting, but that would be my choice...

Thank You!

Chris Bellows said...

Great feedback.

Saturday we'll continue the series eventually adding new characters and settings so I don't write myself into a corner.

CB

Anonymous said...

Really great story. Can we find out more about the chambermaid's backstory and future?

Anonymous said...

May I suggest "Power, the Origins" to follow ?

About the Grandmother's original obtaining of her powerful position, perhaps written via the storytelling device of a hidden (til now) personal diary she kept, which either Maria or perhaps Gigi discovers.

Wherein many hitherto hidden truths are revealed.

Hmmm... perhaps it could even be Harold who first discovers it one listless afternoon under Mia's less-than-watchful eye - and begins to learn just how depraved the old dowager really was.

Maybe Gigi discovers his illicit reading material and after a mind-expanding read, decides to employ some of the Matriarch's methods with the zeal of the newly converted.

Quite a few possibilities...

serene