Thank you all for the comments and suggestions. The book is completed and is in final review, thus altering the story line to accommodate the offered thoughts would be disruptive.
As always, the snippets will be removed when and if published.
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I like the start of this sequel CB.
Thank you you, Jane. The 10/25 snippet is actually from the middle of the prospective sequel.
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