tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4356168308449034603.post3303561598278220083..comments2024-02-20T08:30:55.891-08:00Comments on The Chris Bellows Bedtime Reader: 'Mademoiselle Rules' publishedChris Bellowshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01861364945355670788noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4356168308449034603.post-59856336311757824272010-09-19T13:58:47.353-07:002010-09-19T13:58:47.353-07:00Just read it... nice story. I'm intrigued, tho...Just read it... nice story. I'm intrigued, though... you wrote the same basic story from two different points of view? Wouldn't it make more sense to combine them into one? With a little reworking you could have made one big story of these two small ones.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09950356401449821742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4356168308449034603.post-22145366609789708192010-04-21T05:21:59.915-07:002010-04-21T05:21:59.915-07:00Good luck to you as well.Good luck to you as well.Chris Bellowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01861364945355670788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4356168308449034603.post-48162750965347476412010-04-20T12:38:13.418-07:002010-04-20T12:38:13.418-07:00Good luck.Good luck.AFare24Gethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09866585464422858527noreply@blogger.com